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Have made first edits and some grammar/spelling corrections. Further edits and suggestions welcome - David
I feel it repeats itself too often. It's tone isn't quite right - Dominic

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−	Have made first edits and some grammar/spelling corrections. Further edits and suggestions welcome - David	+	* Have made first edits and some grammar/spelling corrections. Further edits and suggestions welcome - David
−	I feel it repeats itself too often. It's tone isn't quite right ~~not sure whatelse~~ [[User:Dominic\|Dominic]]	+	* I feel it repeats itself too often. It's tone isn't quite right - [[User:Dominic\|Dominic]]